David has been very successful in killing Epics, the superpowered humans that appeared after Calamity appeared in the sky. So successful, in fact, that it seems someone is sending Epics to Newcago just to test out him and his crew. On a trip to the likely source, Babylon Restored, they find out more than they anticipated.
I don’t care much for superhero stories, but I generally like Brandon Sanderson’s writing, so I followed up on this series. It was disappointing.
The writing seems to lack Sanderson’s usual flair. There’s quite a lot of clumsy prose, especially at the start. The action is simplistic and over-explained, and while some of the humor works, much of it is overdone. The dialogue works too hard to be clever, and it doesn’t feel realistic.
The basis of the story itself – the magic system, if you will – remains interesting, and the characters are engaging. It’s just hard to get to it at times. Overall, the story feels like an early draft that still needs considerable polish. If it weren’t for The Rithmatist, I’d just think Sanderson can’t handle YA. In fact, though, his usual style is very accessible, and I’d argue he’d be better off just using that style with these characters.
22 November 2017 Science fiction | Brandon Sanderson | Reckoners |